Dawnwell
night app blocker for iPhone and AndroidFix first: $7.99/week (about $415/year) next to $49.99/year reads as a penalty; show one price or frame the weekly plan honestly.
Open the case file Gumroad · $29 when drafted; listed at $20.39 on Oct 29 re-checkIndie Hackers, Aug 16Solopreneur OS
Notion System + 120 AI Prompts for Indie FoundersFix first: the description renders as a raw-markdown code block (stray **, ###, a fake [Buy now]); rebuild it with Gumroad's editor.
Open the case file Gumroad · $0+Indie Hackers, May 4Graphic Designer Notion Template
Fix first: the page omits the designer-specific features the IH post promises (revision logs, invoices, brief intake); lead with them.
Open the case file Gumroad · $29Indie Hackers, Oct 5ADR Decision Kit
Lightweight Architecture Decision SystemFix first: that worked ADR is buried in text and absent from all 4 covers; make it cover 1 or 2 and point to it at the top.
Open the case file Gumroad · $37Indie Hackers, Jun 1Business Command Center
The Notion Template That Replaces 6 Paid ToolsFix first: one cover + '5.51 KB, 2 pages' makes a $37 workspace look thin; add real workspace screenshots and say it duplicates into Notion.
Open the case file Gumroad · $19Indie Hackers, Sep 16, 20231-1 Tracker for Notion
Fix first: a generic title; name the buyer (managers) and the result in the title and first cover.
Open the case file Own site + Stripe Payment Link · $47 one-timeIndie Hackers, Sep 3Grant Proposal Writer Kit
GrantKitFix first: the page still sells a grant-writing side business, not the nonprofit's own first application; rewrite the top for that buyer.
Open the case file Gumroad · $5+Indie Hackers, Oct 6Freelance Invoice Tracker Spreadsheet
Overdue Alerts (Sheets + ExcelFix first: three identities (Freelance Cash Lab, Mark O. Rogge, a cyber-thriller bio) plus AI-security and party-game products in the same section confuse a freelancer buyer; pick one.
Open the case file Gumroad · $0+Indie Hackers, Sep 12Offer & Pricing Kit
Fix first: one abstract cover; show the filled Offer Canvas, the calculator and an objection script as covers.
Open the case file Own site · 3 free photosX, Oct 24QuickStaging
AI virtual staging and photo edits for listing photosFix first: the $19 pass shows as $0.76/photo next to $0.45 bulk credits, so the hero offer looks like the worst deal; reframe it as 'one listing, done'.
Open the case file Own site, iPhone app, pilot in Canada · free for families during the pilot; a paid Family plan is plannedX, Oct 27TogetherTend
shared parent-care app for siblings, iPhoneFix first: the multilingual, read-aloud parent screen, your strongest differentiator, is buried; move it under the headline.
Open the case file Own site · free to startX, Oct 29Booklier
booklierai.com, book-writing and publishing toolFix first: make the cover ratings, writer counts and earnings checkable (link the books and writers) or label them as examples.
Open the case file Own site, consulting offers · $399 Clarity AuditX, Oct 19Abdola Munir
positioning and growth marketing for founders (Clarity Audit, Brand Sprint, Fractional CMOFix first: the testimonials praise your design work and the numbers come from in-house roles; add one founder before-and-after above the offers.
Open the case file Own site, consulting and workshops · free workshops for communities; done-with-you help by callX, Oct 22Joseph Mugen
AI help for small and local business owners (free workshops, Mugen Solutions, marketingFix first: the hero's only button opens the workshop request form for coworking spaces and groups; point it at the owner's 30-minute call.
Open the case file Own site, remote services (just launched) · no prices shown; discovery callX, Oct 29Emmanuella Udoye
executive virtual assistance and travel planningFix first: every 'Book a Call' button, including the executive-assistant one, opens a travel-planning consultation; give each service the right booking link.
Open the case file Own site, agency services · free 1-page marketing plan; services month-to-monthX, Oct 27Mainsplash
full-service marketing for small businesses (free 1-page marketing plan, month-to-month servicesFix first: the free plan is the funnel but no sample is shown and the form asks budget first; put an anonymised 1-page plan beside the form.
Open the case file16 teardowns. Each case file uses the format of a Guided Build weekly review (what's working, the one thing to fix first, what to fix next and a single next task) and links the maker's public invitation. Pages change after we review them; if one's been fixed since, good.
How pages fall
- Look at your page as a buyer would, logged out and on a phone.One page's whole description renders as a raw code block.
- Show the inside.One kit's best asset, a complete worked example, appears in none of its cover images.
- Put what's unique in the first lines.One template's designer-specific features are in the maker's forum post but not on the sales page.
- Make every number agree.120 prompts in the title, "50+" on the cover.
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